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That took a turn I never saw coming.
Same here, Andi.
Did the surprise work? Was it surprising, but plausible?
Oh, yeah. Apparently Ms. O'Brien was not smoking a clay pipe. Absolutely no smoking by Mrs. O'Brien. Ever. I don't how that got in there. Must have been a virus.
It was quite plausible but it might have been nice to have some throwaway comments in earlier conversations to hint at the larger situation.
Good advice. That's one problem with having only a sketchy plan as guide. Makes foreshadowing difficult. Consider this a very first draft.
That took a turn I never saw coming.
ReplyDeleteSame here, Andi.
ReplyDeleteDid the surprise work? Was it surprising, but plausible?
ReplyDeleteOh, yeah. Apparently Ms. O'Brien was not smoking a clay pipe. Absolutely no smoking by Mrs. O'Brien. Ever. I don't how that got in there. Must have been a virus.
ReplyDeleteIt was quite plausible but it might have been nice to have some throwaway comments in earlier conversations to hint at the larger situation.
ReplyDeleteGood advice. That's one problem with having only a sketchy plan as guide. Makes foreshadowing difficult. Consider this a very first draft.
ReplyDelete